tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post1385954595053625511..comments2024-03-18T00:15:53.183-07:00Comments on Louise Phillips Writer: Poetry Bus Poem - The StrandUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-37888029435530332722010-11-09T09:17:33.480-08:002010-11-09T09:17:33.480-08:00The feet eating water is my favoutite bit! Thanks...The feet eating water is my favoutite bit! Thanks NanuLouisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05912071192179983603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-26861838547942585662010-11-09T08:39:46.893-08:002010-11-09T08:39:46.893-08:00I like it; the hugeness of the strand and the wate...I like it; the hugeness of the strand and the water eating the feet, I can feel the cold!NanUhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11596765792663269178noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-14777517589952024242010-11-09T05:03:55.109-08:002010-11-09T05:03:55.109-08:00Thanks Titus.Thanks Titus.Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05912071192179983603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-44315597924984389802010-11-09T02:24:09.076-08:002010-11-09T02:24:09.076-08:00Loved this! I was there with the strong locating o...Loved this! I was there with the strong locating of the poem, the rhyming works so well, and as all have said, that suggested story... <br />Really nice work.Titushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16380213493011623153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-66327659011603088642010-11-08T04:18:02.019-08:002010-11-08T04:18:02.019-08:00Oh to do so many things! Working like a lunatic o...Oh to do so many things! Working like a lunatic on a novel right now, but I'll hold that thought. Thanks Jessica and thanks for a really good prompt as well.Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05912071192179983603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-60624004559819291382010-11-08T03:49:36.686-08:002010-11-08T03:49:36.686-08:00that's lovely :) I liked the understated rhyme...that's lovely :) I liked the understated rhyme, the quietness of it. I agree with Peter; you could do a series of poems on it. Or short stories.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05075292153806720848noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-59404947032048825832010-11-08T00:49:14.006-08:002010-11-08T00:49:14.006-08:00Hmm,that's something to think about. Tks Pete...Hmm,that's something to think about. Tks PeterLouisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05912071192179983603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-38335239855213768172010-11-07T20:24:25.549-08:002010-11-07T20:24:25.549-08:00Yes, there's a lot unsaid here, hinted at. May...Yes, there's a lot unsaid here, hinted at. Maybe you could develop it into a sequence of poems?Peter Gouldinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13292063172122249202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-64418456128273677312010-11-07T11:56:37.444-08:002010-11-07T11:56:37.444-08:00There is a back story alright, hence perhaps your ...There is a back story alright, hence perhaps your feeling that the end is mysterious, glad you liked it!Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05912071192179983603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-41475336711956221392010-11-07T11:32:44.032-08:002010-11-07T11:32:44.032-08:00Really (so many over-used superlatives, aren't...Really (so many over-used superlatives, aren't there) wonderful! The hidden faces, the wind, the hand-grip - all so powerful and the end is really mysterious. I liked this a whole lot.<br /><br />KatKat Mortensenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16877694888419628533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-39776052772358682032010-11-07T09:13:35.684-08:002010-11-07T09:13:35.684-08:00Thanks Niamh & Rachel.Thanks Niamh & Rachel.Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05912071192179983603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-67232497926552274662010-11-07T07:50:17.426-08:002010-11-07T07:50:17.426-08:00Very effective with some lovely little rhymes dott...Very effective with some lovely little rhymes dotted about.Rachel Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11803852725693518924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-13097746450073120722010-11-07T07:39:06.818-08:002010-11-07T07:39:06.818-08:00That is just gorgeous - love the breeze filling ha...That is just gorgeous - love the breeze filling hair with knots and sand, and the tension leading to the ending, dramatic!!!Niamh Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519443787482685320noreply@blogger.com