tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post5714361517781255003..comments2024-03-18T00:15:53.183-07:00Comments on Louise Phillips Writer: Magpie Tales - StreetUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-61021999330790715272011-02-07T00:51:46.087-08:002011-02-07T00:51:46.087-08:00My favorite lines: "My high heels are not imp...My favorite lines: "My high heels are not impressed." and then "I could die here" which really intrigued me. I really want to know her journey from the innocent girl to the short-skirted lady of the evening.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-52729680471605413202011-02-06T15:42:28.676-08:002011-02-06T15:42:28.676-08:00Thanks everyone for leaving such positive comments...Thanks everyone for leaving such positive comments.Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05912071192179983603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-8928601746982266882011-02-06T13:46:46.716-08:002011-02-06T13:46:46.716-08:00What a fabulous piece to come from a load of old b...What a fabulous piece to come from a load of old bricks! Great read.Helenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13447013188405986054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-12047734409586177562011-02-06T07:57:26.023-08:002011-02-06T07:57:26.023-08:00Thanks Kat. Not sure if anyone got that the chara...Thanks Kat. Not sure if anyone got that the character is supposed to be a woman of the night,probably not!Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05912071192179983603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-12902204076645260682011-02-06T07:53:07.533-08:002011-02-06T07:53:07.533-08:00The "I could die" line is extrememly pow...The "I could die" line is extrememly powerful, by the way.Kat Mortensenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16877694888419628533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-57379038699482468772011-02-06T07:52:30.920-08:002011-02-06T07:52:30.920-08:00I love that you saw your reflection and it gave yo...I love that you saw your reflection and it gave you pause. Really nice piece, Socks! (I wish my reflection looked like that!)Kat Mortensenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16877694888419628533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-48010285982556191802011-02-03T20:50:55.128-08:002011-02-03T20:50:55.128-08:00Interesting piece, meeting oneself along the way.....Interesting piece, meeting oneself along the way... so apt to the roads we travel.Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-24322539250293563202011-02-02T22:37:42.149-08:002011-02-02T22:37:42.149-08:00Good start to a story.Good start to a story.spacedlawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12462723005560128474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-68491471201865249262011-02-02T21:22:23.641-08:002011-02-02T21:22:23.641-08:00that is a great intro to a much larger story...sha...that is a great intro to a much larger story...shall we look for a novel?....bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-41093866006737926552011-02-02T20:40:43.943-08:002011-02-02T20:40:43.943-08:00what a profound idea to create in a story... well ...what a profound idea to create in a story... well done. i also enjoyed the pacing of the story.girl daydreaminghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752976412833155762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-29003075384367587302011-02-02T19:18:29.942-08:002011-02-02T19:18:29.942-08:00I was wondering what her story was, I really liked...I was wondering what her story was, I really liked this. Reflective and gritty. Nice.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-50243304900795138112011-02-02T19:02:50.023-08:002011-02-02T19:02:50.023-08:00"My high heels were not impressed" grea..."My high heels were not impressed" great imagery!<br />Thank you for visiting my blog also~<br />GeeezLoueez (aka LeAnn)LeAnnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12019589704697731357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-42432793536401906142011-02-02T15:29:59.585-08:002011-02-02T15:29:59.585-08:00Wonderfully crafted slice of time - one that grabs...Wonderfully crafted slice of time - one that grabs the reader and hangs on.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-65426243075309296542011-02-02T14:22:34.493-08:002011-02-02T14:22:34.493-08:00Thank you everyone for your positive comments.Thank you everyone for your positive comments.Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05912071192179983603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-37021243663446832862011-02-02T13:32:53.189-08:002011-02-02T13:32:53.189-08:00powerful and provocative...you have great talent f...powerful and provocative...you have great talent for envoking images..well done!Donna B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/07015770616281528620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-91799452557745322272011-02-02T12:17:51.646-08:002011-02-02T12:17:51.646-08:00very thoughtful, from jumping the cracks on the pa...very thoughtful, from jumping the cracks on the pavement to stumbling in high heels...how growing up shrinks us!<br />It reminds me of a rhyme we used to sing...<br /><br />And the last line is a nice little hook!Words A Dayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04423263654771820182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-76410006638475103492011-02-02T11:24:24.634-08:002011-02-02T11:24:24.634-08:00Very evocative, powerful place. I walked with you ...Very evocative, powerful place. I walked with you there, just now. I look forward to getting to know you better through your words.Nana Johttp://ananasjourney.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-86144765766782950162011-02-02T07:31:32.481-08:002011-02-02T07:31:32.481-08:00very intriguing story. leaves me wanting to know m...very intriguing story. leaves me wanting to know more. thanks for visiting my blog!Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-90428496172589276832011-02-02T03:54:40.045-08:002011-02-02T03:54:40.045-08:00There was a great sadness about this piece of pros...There was a great sadness about this piece of prose.. powerful writing.christinehttp://www.writingforpleasure42.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-13231076071116367622011-02-01T17:34:35.428-08:002011-02-01T17:34:35.428-08:00I want to know more. This sounds like a great begi...I want to know more. This sounds like a great beginning.Sukohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11893742747135555499noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-45370919564474644522011-02-01T12:00:57.709-08:002011-02-01T12:00:57.709-08:00Meeting oneself face to face..so insightful..reall...Meeting oneself face to face..so insightful..really well done!Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-88725485051373670642011-02-01T11:48:35.469-08:002011-02-01T11:48:35.469-08:00This is a intense question we all ask ourselves at...This is a intense question we all ask ourselves at one time or another. It doesn't matter much what the lie is just that we recogize it before it consumes us. Lovely workKristen Haskellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07481526316071592146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-30829703072593756152011-02-01T11:30:59.615-08:002011-02-01T11:30:59.615-08:00Boy did you ever capture the mood! What a voice!Boy did you ever capture the mood! What a voice!RJ Clarkenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03018296461199649445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-15825254651198479792011-02-01T11:08:38.852-08:002011-02-01T11:08:38.852-08:00I really like the last line! I stood in the middle...I really like the last line! I stood in the middle of a flooded street wondering the same thing! Thanks-izzyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06379007428464069723noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-30835241468410228122011-02-01T11:01:01.169-08:002011-02-01T11:01:01.169-08:00This is the night time version of my story....I lo...This is the night time version of my story....I loved how you portrayed the night on the cobblestone street xoSherry Irvinehttp://poetrybysherry.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.com