tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post5851748963124951554..comments2024-03-18T00:15:53.183-07:00Comments on Louise Phillips Writer: PantherUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger29125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-83157669752680027252011-08-03T22:56:23.051-07:002011-08-03T22:56:23.051-07:00Hope you and the dogs made it home safe riggerscam...Hope you and the dogs made it home safe riggerscam!Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05912071192179983603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-43280088416045895212011-08-03T14:16:35.475-07:002011-08-03T14:16:35.475-07:0010.10 pm, gonna take the dogs out and see if we ca...10.10 pm, gonna take the dogs out and see if we can hunt down this inferior beast, hang on, a soundless lethal shift just made me reconsider.<br />not normally a poetry fan but i liked this....of throttled throat....good and earthy stuffriggerscamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05290904819644936131noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-53474751762768035242011-04-08T08:07:15.395-07:002011-04-08T08:07:15.395-07:00Thanks Nanu & Jingle!Thanks Nanu & Jingle!Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05912071192179983603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-65997995332715084892011-04-07T17:50:18.491-07:002011-04-07T17:50:18.491-07:00divine..
love the vivid imagery.divine..<br />love the vivid imagery.Jinglehttp://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-47321843961192342592011-04-06T09:31:26.981-07:002011-04-06T09:31:26.981-07:00A fitting tribute to a fine, fine feline!A fitting tribute to a fine, fine feline!NanUhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11596765792663269178noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-30016919633583003892011-04-06T09:26:55.405-07:002011-04-06T09:26:55.405-07:00A beautiful beast indeed Emerging Writer, but you ...A beautiful beast indeed Emerging Writer, but you are right Bug, a bit on the scary side, and Muse Swings, yes, best to avoid the lunch!Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05912071192179983603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-63540625184750269392011-04-06T09:14:48.361-07:002011-04-06T09:14:48.361-07:00Beautiful! I watched the panther move and attack ...Beautiful! I watched the panther move and attack - I didn't stay to watch her enjoy her luch, but I surely enjoyed your poem. Happy Blogaversary!MuseSwingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11999288873532715380noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-48846066379582387902011-04-05T15:22:53.725-07:002011-04-05T15:22:53.725-07:00Well I'm terrified now - I'm no panther so...Well I'm terrified now - I'm no panther so I would surely be lunch. You did such a great job describing the stalking and attacking!The Bughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07509037206264761261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-53114786868520132882011-04-05T13:45:30.791-07:002011-04-05T13:45:30.791-07:00What a beautiful beast you describeWhat a beautiful beast you describeEmerging Writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06539530495238043923noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-83262698448452347792011-04-05T12:24:29.847-07:002011-04-05T12:24:29.847-07:00Thanks Kat, I was wondering about taking out the c...Thanks Kat, I was wondering about taking out the comma's altogether? Will look up Black Alibi.Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05912071192179983603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-37511601367748646802011-04-05T05:19:38.004-07:002011-04-05T05:19:38.004-07:00Wow!Wow!Wow! So many expert word-choices and rhyth...Wow!Wow!Wow! So many expert word-choices and rhythms and phrasing.<br />"as paw to ground,<br />a soundless lethal shift" - I love the decision not to capitalize, making the pacing (literally) palpable.<br />So many expert bits - "of throttled throat, or broken crunch" - oooh!<br /><br />You must read Cornell Woolrich's, "Black Alibi".<br /><br />KatKat Mortensenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16877694888419628533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-33620288983518035602011-04-05T00:59:40.163-07:002011-04-05T00:59:40.163-07:00Indeed ds, being alone might mean being dinner and...Indeed ds, being alone might mean being dinner and thanks Lucy!Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05912071192179983603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-52450335783075403622011-04-05T00:40:08.717-07:002011-04-05T00:40:08.717-07:00Literally a panther. Battle won. Dinner. Yumm!Literally a panther. Battle won. Dinner. Yumm!Lucy Westenrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12787225228788303013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-35518587996087437922011-04-04T14:29:20.342-07:002011-04-04T14:29:20.342-07:00The soundless lethal shift...broken crunch to dead...The soundless lethal shift...broken crunch to deadly silence. <br />They are such powerful, swift, beautiful creatures (but I wouldn't want to be alone with one).dshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07616750784052488695noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-8637703693372121652011-04-04T12:36:02.952-07:002011-04-04T12:36:02.952-07:00Don't think they're supposed to be cute Ji...Don't think they're supposed to be cute Jinksy!!Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05912071192179983603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-48719405657176164112011-04-04T11:51:51.814-07:002011-04-04T11:51:51.814-07:00Black panthers give me the creeps...Black panthers give me the creeps...Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-67057207793338220852011-04-04T11:41:19.849-07:002011-04-04T11:41:19.849-07:00Nah FTSE, impossible!Nah FTSE, impossible!Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05912071192179983603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-59716959265316336882011-04-04T11:01:08.239-07:002011-04-04T11:01:08.239-07:00Domestic Oub is right. Folk might start believing ...Domestic Oub is right. Folk might start believing you.Doctor FTSEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10052101566471519778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-56216829000499221962011-04-04T10:34:30.390-07:002011-04-04T10:34:30.390-07:00Thanks Domestic Oub, but doubt I'll stop sayin...Thanks Domestic Oub, but doubt I'll stop saying that!!!Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05912071192179983603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-79410311956981228462011-04-04T10:02:27.513-07:002011-04-04T10:02:27.513-07:00You know Socks, you're really going to have to...You know Socks, you're really going to have to stop saying 'I'm not really a poet...' Great stuff :)Domestic Oubhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17298706907126418711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-39015440202263466722011-04-04T05:59:48.319-07:002011-04-04T05:59:48.319-07:00Thanks Izzy.Thanks Izzy.Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05912071192179983603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-2527922290372301882011-04-04T05:41:36.243-07:002011-04-04T05:41:36.243-07:00Black blood curls! great ! you surely caught my at...Black blood curls! great ! you surely caught my attention - steeping inside the skin...Thanks.izzyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06379007428464069723noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-2600637916783215622011-04-04T04:56:14.414-07:002011-04-04T04:56:14.414-07:00Thanks Peter.Thanks Peter.Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05912071192179983603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-64557657786660343592011-04-04T04:17:57.529-07:002011-04-04T04:17:57.529-07:00The poem slowly unwinds like a panther about to sp...The poem slowly unwinds like a panther about to spring. Fascinating...Peter Gouldinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13292063172122249202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7999132639532480534.post-81425196167402069422011-04-04T01:47:36.921-07:002011-04-04T01:47:36.921-07:00Thanks Dave, I did some before, in the middle, and...Thanks Dave, I did some before, in the middle, and after, at some ungodly hour last night when the house was finally quiet!<br /><br />Great driving of the bus Mighty Titus, lots of passengers, delighted for you to use poem, just sent off an email!Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05912071192179983603noreply@blogger.com