Moon Change
Standing halfway up my mother,
neck bent back, I looked hard at the moon,
heard stories about the man who lived in it,
full of cheese and shaped like a banana.
Older, out the back garden,
I saw it through my brother’s telescope,
all white and round and full of dark holes
that he told me were ‘moon craters’.
Crossed- legged below the kitchen table,
Crossed- legged below the kitchen table,
I watched Neil Armstrong land on it,
bobbling with his flag of stars and stripes,
listening to the men from N.A.S.A.
Later I kissed under it, long and deep,
dark romantic laneways lit by indigo blue,
falling in love and right back out again,
wondering who was looking at who?
When the kids were small, I swore by it,
wishing sleep would replace lonely nights awake,
whilst now, above the mountains it guides me home,
even in the light of day, teetering behind clouds.
Through the window on the upstairs landing,
it feels closer now tonight,
my neck bends back, just like a child,
as I remember piece by piece, the moon change.
Beautiful! I love how the moon played so memorably in your life. excellent magpie.
ReplyDeleteThis is absolutely fantastic...loved every stanza!
ReplyDeletehoneyhaiku took the words right out of my mouth. This is absolutely beautiful and a real joy to get to read.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comments today and previously. I appreciate them!
I agree it does look like the moon ... I enjoyed your journey with the changes
ReplyDeleteA lifetime in the moon, very cleverly worked out.
ReplyDeleteI smiled all through your reminiscences reflected in the moon. Delightful.
ReplyDeleteThanks guys, and glad I got you smiling Stafford Ray. 'Ray' was my surname before I got married by the way, you don't see it too often!!
ReplyDeleteExcellent writing, and I have to say I could identify with every line--I know I've thought that "who's looking at who?" thing--it's really nice when a poem can get inside your head with you like this does. Good stuff.
ReplyDeleteLovely, again my favorite line is
ReplyDelete"wondering who was looking at who?"
and the detail that we still have to bend our necks to look at the moon, child or not, is beautiful too.
I remember the moon landing so clearly...one of my very earliest memories..
ReplyDeleteI love your take on the prompt.
Beautiful! I loved this. Yes, the moon is always there, always seeing us through.
ReplyDeletehi 120socks
ReplyDeletelove the journey
a quiet companion
best wishes
lucychili
Thanks, Hedgewitch, Words A Day,Southwest Arkis,DebbyMc,Lucychilli!
ReplyDeleteA beautiful and enticing, "phases..of the moon and you"!
ReplyDeleteA lovely life with moon. Brava!
ReplyDeleteTouching piece, splendid moments in those moon changes.
ReplyDeleteThanks guys!
ReplyDeleteA wonderful lifes journey! Bravo!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
What a wonderful take on the prompt. I enjoyed your post.
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InspiredbyLisa
You have narrated your life's path here. Very beautifully done..
ReplyDeletemisty dew
Great idea, beautifully worked. Love it.
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely beautiful. It feels like home reading this poem.
ReplyDeleteThis is really beautiful, 120. My husband thought it looked like the craters of the moon, as well.
ReplyDeleteAnd the man in the moon sees everything...
ReplyDeleteThanks again guys, hooray for the man in the moon Jinksy!
ReplyDeletePhases of the moon .. according to Ms. 120 Socks! Brilliant.
ReplyDeleteThe endlessly fascinating moon. Very nicely done.
ReplyDeleteNice, solid melding of memories, history and change. Good piece.
ReplyDeleteMoon change....i remember how i used to think that the moon changed form kind of like a wink...when i was a child....so i can relate to this beautiful piece Socks...love it! :-)
ReplyDeleteHonestly enjoyed this journey. The thought of the moon - a constant witness to our lives - is very poetic. Well done!!
ReplyDeleteLovely idea to make a poem on your personal "phases of the Moon."
ReplyDeleteThanks everyone for your supportive comments, they are very much appreciated.
ReplyDeleteThe "moon change" so keeping with our lives which are always in constant motion and momentum. The moon seems to be the anchor or mirror of all that we do here and marks our phases and feelings similarily completing life's many of life's moon phases.
ReplyDeleteI loved this one! You related the phases of the moon to the phases of one's life. Great take on the prompt. Bravo!
ReplyDeletereal and beautiful.
ReplyDeleteLike the many phases of the moon, the many phases of our life...what a constant companion she has been...a soul within a soul...connecting to our own...blessings...bkm
ReplyDeleteI read this when you first posted and intended to come back before now to comment.
ReplyDeleteI too watched Neil Armstrong land on it so can identify although I was on a settee - not cross legged below a kitchen table. I remember all too well the waiting and the excitement.
Your take on the Magpie is magical.
Thanks all, I am glad Bee that you were more comfy than I with a nice soft settee!
ReplyDeleteWonderful, wonderful...as I howl at the moon.
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